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2021-10-10 18:27分类:高二英语 阅读:

 

写作任务:
针对英语学习中出现的倦怠情绪,老师在英语课上让同学们谈谈英语给自己的学习和生活带来的积极影响或变化,以激发同学们学习英语的兴趣。请你写一篇英语短文,说明学习英语给你带来的积极影响。词数:120—150。

分析:

1. 本次写作任务要求我们针对英语学习中出现的倦怠情绪,说明英语给我们的学习和生活带来的积极影响或变化,属于事理说明文范畴。事理说明文是阐述事物的本质、事物内部或事物之间的内在联系的一类说明文。首先针对目前存在的事实提出自己的观点,引出下文自己要说明的道理;主体部分要找到合理的数据或事例支持自己的观点,以此启发读者,引起他们的兴趣。

2. 本次写作任务要求谈谈英语给我们的生活和学习带来的积极影响,以激发学习兴趣。本文可以使用举例说明法。首先,提出英语学习的现状是存在着倦怠情绪,然后可以简单分析一下存在这种情况的原因,是因为同学们没有把语言学习与语言应用相结合,语言只是枯燥的文字符号。如果多多发现英语在生活中的实际用途就会发现学习英语的趣味之处。然后从现实出发,说明英语的重要性,如校园内外随处可见外国朋友,在一些公共场合如机场、公交车站、旅游景点遇到外籍友人可以随时提供帮助,在帮助他人的同时宣传自我和城市形象;交友的范围更加广泛,能从外籍朋友那里获取更多的信息、了解更多的文化,开拓视野、增强自信心;眼光放远一点,未来的职业生涯中,英语也会助你一臂之力。最后,在以上说明的基础上总结英语的重要性,以提高同学们学习英语的积极性。

初稿:

These days, many students are tired of learning English, and some even want to give it up. Are you one of them? Do you know what an important role it plays in our daily life and studies?

With the development of economy, English becomes an important international language. With more and more interaction taking place between Western countries and China, speaking English fluently can help us find a position in a company easily and make more friends. Of course, when we travel abroad, we can avoid much trouble because nearly everyone can understand you if you ask questions in English. Finally, having good English is an important condition for getting accepted into a university. In short, do your best to develop your interest in learning English, and improve it by practising as much as possible.

教师点评:
这篇习作从英语带给我们的生活和学习方面的好处进行了举例说明,值得肯定。
但是,文章也存在着很大的不足。首先,文章开头的提问对表现文章主题没有任何意义,没有直接表明态度。经济发展和英语普及之间的关联有些牵强,降低了稿件的质量;国家之间的交流合作的说法离学生的生活比较远,达不到实际的说服效果。其次,文章段落衔接和过渡不够自然。

成稿:

Many students these days are bored with English and think that learning it is pointless. One reason for this is that they spend all their time learning grammar rules but never actually getting to use the language. So here’s an idea: get out and start talking!

Many foreigners come to visit China, and airports, bus stations and tourist sites are great places to find them. Speak English to them and offer them your help. You may even make friends with them, which will open opportunities for you to practice English in the future, learn more about their cultures, and introduce them to your own. With good English, you’ll also find it much easier to get desirable work in the future.

Now that you know the importance of English, do your best to learn it!

成稿点评:
修改后的文章,开头提出了自己的观点——即英语在生活中的实用性,自然地引出了下文的话题,结构上自然流畅。从学生的生活出发找出一些更为实际的英语优势来说服读者,说理效果较好,出色地完成了写作任务。PowerfulSentences:1. Learning English can help one learn about foreign culture.2. Language is a tool for communicating which is important in all aspects of daily life.3. Now that you know its importance, make up your mind to learn it well.4. Mastering a language requires much hard work.

巩固练习:
为了培养学生们的责任感,你班鼓励同学们竞选班长。请你写一篇英语短文,谈谈当选班长的意义,发表在校英语论坛上。词数:120左右。

参考范文:

Some students believe that being a monitor is a waste of time, while I don’t think so and believe that being a monitor is very important.

As a monitor, one has opportunities to serve one’s class and communicate more with one’s classmates, which helps build one’s relationships with others. A class is like a small society, and being a monitor gives one opportunities to train one’s leadership that will be an important future skill and can’t be learned through books. Students should not only concentrate on their studies, but also improve themselves in other aspects. So, in order to improve ourselves, do your best to run for monitor.

 

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