Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to introduce to you my new design ideas. It’s universally known that the kitchen is a place where housewives prepare foods. But as a designer, I would like it to be a place for meals, leisure as well as recreation. In my opinion, the kitchen should be clean and tidy, and designed according to its owner’s tastes. It should also have modern equipment to make cooking easy and more convenient, including a radio or TV set to let people listen to music and learn about the current news while cooking. A beautiful dining room should be just next to it, allowing dishes to be served conveniently, and helping with the hosting of parties, or family get-togethers like that of the eve of the Spring Festival.
I’m writing to introduce to you my new design for a kitchen —one that is clean, inexpensive, environmentally friendly, modern and convenient. We will use solar power throughout the new kitchen as a way of cooking without pollution. What’s more, the heat generated during the cooking process can be absorbed by plants hanging from the ceiling of the kitchen. We all know that there is always water on the kitchen floor; this is a problem the housewives won’t need to worry about in this new kitchen since the floor will be supplied with many small holes, and the water collected from them will in turn be used to flush toilets or water flowers. The walls of the kitchen will be made of a new material that is easy to clean. Cooking in such a kitchen will be a relaxing experience rather than a stressful one.
I hope you’ll agree that I’ve done my best to make the kitchen a relaxing place.
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